In Room 4 we have been looking at making sentences more interesting for our reader by adding details. We have had so much fun taking a boring sentence and making it great. Check out my examples.
The lady walked out of the shop.
The elegant lady quickly jogged out of the boutique shop.
The pig ate from his trough.
The Royal pig ate cakes out of his golden trough.
The teacher came into the classroom.
The scary teacher tiptoed into the classroom and made the big kids scream.
The mouse went into his hole.
The greedy mouse tiptoed into his gloomy hole to avoid the cat.
The robber went into the house.
The robber escaped and snuck into the dark house.
The girl walked into the classroom.
The mean girl smirked and stepped into the silent classroom.
The dog sat by his kennel.
The puppy lay next to his kennel.
The bird flew in the window.
The bird whacked into the cracked window.
The cat sat on the mat.
The fluffy kitten placed his rear onto the ragged mat.
The computer stopped working.
The chromebook ran out of batteries.
The door opened.
The gate creaked slowly open.
The cute fluffy kitten was very tired of playing with his owner so he placed his rear onto the ragged mat. Then another kitten joined then another and another and another until the mat was full. Suddenly the only cat in the house sat on top of the kittens and the whole pile collapsed and the cat had the mat to herself. Until the dog joined her and another and another and another then all the labradors chased her away. She was just looking for somewhere to sleep, until she found the cockatiel's cage……. SQUAWK SQUAWK SQUAWK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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